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Slit your Wrists and Join the Party
        It’s all fun and games
But you must hurry and pay up
        Not even dying’s free
So shoot me up with Candy Desire
        And let me loose out on the floor
The rhythm we can create when we’re side by side
        Up and down a children’s rollercoaster
Follow me into Heaven
        And I’ll show you it’s worse than Hell
Why don’t we float on clouds with silver wonders
        I can feel you the same
Tear me down in this sadism high
        Beat me with Heroin Kisses
We can cry forever in this lift
        Up and down in a fake merry-go-round
Crash and Turn
        Shattered Mirror Lives
I can see you on the depths of my pupil
        Can I have you just a little harder?
Broken silver
        Lies in the shallow depths of my blood
But I am lost when this pain is the ultimate expression of joy
        Feel me, feel me,
Twist and Turn
        Feed me, feed me,
Before I crash
        Before I wake
Before I cum
        To life’s rude jolt to the system
When the power in our dreams is lost
        When the children stop singing
When we lie with Death
        I can feel the hesitance
Of a long-forgotten heartbeat
        As I am poked and plucked
But lie in Green and leave me to wander
        I’ll remember my soul soon enough
Alice’s White Rabbit gives us pills to forget Reality
        And after a while,
We stop wondering.
©2005-2009 ~Kuroi-Tsubasa69
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Author's Comments

This is about drug addiction. Yay! :w00t:

Why did i call it "Dope Show Carnival"? Because it sounds nice. ^_^ :heart:

That's about it. I put it in transgressive since, well, it's about drug addiction. At least, that is what i tried to make it like. ^_^;;

*Note: The line, "shattered mirror lives", "lives" is to be read like 'the lives of the sailours', not 'He lives! Frankenstein lives!!!' :heart: Thanx!!*

Speaker = Female. It's sounds like a girl, right? *sweat* Anyways, this is one of the very, very few (like 2...) pieces that i've written as a female voice....i really can't write that way...*sweats* Is it bad that i'm not versatile?? *double sweats* Thanks for letting me rant about that....:heart:.*

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:icondeadmooncircus:
very insightful..... my favourite parts are 'up and down in a fake merry-go-round' and then the last 3 lines..... very nice.... :+fav:

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:iconkuroi-tsubasa69:
*blushes* Thanx very much!! :heart:

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:iconillusionofreality:
Very impressive and original. Of course, I'm a sucker for anything that alludes to "Alice in Wonderland". :dance:
:iconkuroi-tsubasa69:
:w00t: I know what you mean! That's why i usually do that, 'cause i just love Alice in Wonderland! :w00t:

And thank you very much!!!! :heart:

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:iconjeseltheevilelf:
that was an amazing poem....i really liked the alice in wonderland part...really awesome
:heart: jesel

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i think your even crazier than i am. and thats pretty hard to top.
:iconjeseltheevilelf:
that was an amazing poem....i really liked the alice in wonderland part...really awesome
:heart: jesel

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i think your even crazier than i am. and thats pretty hard to top.
:iconkuroi-tsubasa69:
*blushes* Thank you, My Fvaourite Little Evil Elf!! :hug:

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